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“You’re very talented and very skillful. Who taught you how to
embroider like that?> > Before she could say anything, a water nymph
“Who do you think she learned it from? The arts and crafts nymph must
have taught her. She is the master of embroidery.”
The girl raised her head and gave the water nymph a dirty look.
“That’s not true!” she said. I did not learn it from anybody. I was
born talented. Who is this art and crafts nymph, huh? She needs to
learn how to embroider from me."
How can I write the last two sentences in a better English? Could you
also find my mistakes throughout my writing?
I don't know whether it is a right platform or not, but do you mind
proofreading my paragraphs or sentences from time to time? I really
need somebody to correct my English and really appreciate your help.
Thank you all,
I appreciate if you check my mistakes in this writing. I'm not sure
about the last sentence. How can I improve it and write it in a better
English.>> Thank you all very much for your help.
I too was curious about this girl. Kate led the way and I followed her
behind, quickly passing the meadow we came to girl's side.>> She was a
blond girl, so blond that even her eyebrows and eyelashes were golden.
She knelt down on the grass turning her face to the sun. She was just
sitting still. If she hadn't moved her lips while singing, one could
easily have mistaken her for a statue.>> “You see, uncle? ” whispered
Kate. “She is such a weird person, isn’t she?> Why is she sitting like
“Why don’t you ask her?” I said.
I told you uncle, I did ask her but she didn't even look at my face.
“ Maybe she didn’t hear you while singing. Let’s wait till her song is over.”
We waited and waited, but the blond girl’s song didn’t seem like it was
going to end .It was a song without lyrics. Coming deep from her heart,
it was a fascinating melody which was sometimes rising and sometimes